Re-Working a Thought

I have had a few people read over my page on marriage and I have decided that I am going to re-write it in a few different sections. I had thought that the two primary subjects contained therein were closely related enough that I could simply present them together without too much trouble. Unfortunately for me reality is far from being so simple, and I have determined that it would be better to expand upon both ideas in separate essays. They will be written and posted in short order(hopefully) and the original write up will be taken down.